The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Sometimes I Panic" effectively conveys a sense of anxiety and panic through its use of visceral, physical descriptions. The repetition of "Sometimes" at the start of each stanza creates a rhythm that mirrors the unpredictability and cyclical nature of panic attacks.

However, the poem could benefit from more varied sentence structure and a deeper exploration of the speaker's emotional state. While the physical symptoms of panic are vividly described, the emotional and psychological aspects of the experience could be further developed.

In addition, the poem ends abruptly with "I feel like I'm going to die." While this line is powerful, it might be more impactful if it were followed by a reflection on the speaker's feelings or thoughts in the aftermath of a panic attack. This could provide a more nuanced understanding of the speaker's experience and give the poem a stronger sense of closure.

Lastly, the poem could also benefit from the use of more figurative language. Metaphors, similes, and other figurative devices could add depth and complexity to the poem's descriptions and make the speaker's experience more relatable to readers.

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but not for more than the seconds that it takes to recognize that you are going to have an accident; or a few minutes
in a bad sitiuation. I can't imagine what it must be like to have it sustained for more than that! Minutes must seem like hours.
Tinnitus I know, I have lived with it a great portion of my life, but I can't imagine many and sustained attacks of panic.
You have done an admirable job of telling the story.
Nice work! ~ Geezer.
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The bane of my existence and part of my daily life. They are horrible and mimic so many other terrifying illnesses. Thank you for writing so honestly and descriptively about the hell that ensues as a result of them. Well done!