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Rain

Submitted by Clentin on Sun, 2023-04-16 08:53

Rain brings about frowns
But should be viewed with delight
Watching how life sounds

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sun, 2023-04-16 11:42

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brings me an image of fine drops sheeting down, to spread over the earth. The rushing sound of joy as it meets the hungry ground to bring life to our senses. A great Haiku! ~ Geezer.
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