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Prayer
Spoken from within
Begging for help from above
Listening with hope
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Seren
Sun, 2023-02-19 09:35
Dear Clentin
Whatever your faith this is a prayer all can relate to, it's a universal poem that anyone could take something away from, I have to say for three lines it packs a punch.
Well done!!
Kind Regards Seren
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Clentin
Sun, 2023-02-19 07:14
Thank you. I am new at this
Thank you. I am new at this poetry business but really want to try different forms.
Please feel free to make any comments as well as suggestions when reading any of my poems.
Again, thanks
author commentSeren
Sun, 2023-02-19 07:17
Clentin
This is a perfect little gem as it sits, I found nothing to critique! Welcome to Neopoet, I hope to be round more this week and I will look for more of your work when time permits.
Kind Regards, Seren.
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
RoseBlack
Sun, 2023-02-19 08:44
Powerful
I agree with Seren. Three lines say so much. You are a very talented writer and I have enjoyed your works thus far. I look forward to seeing more.
~RoseBlack~
Clentin
Sun, 2023-02-19 12:11
Thank you. I appreciate your
Thank you. I appreciate your generous comments. I just started but plan to write more and to read more, your poems and other in the group.
author commentLavender
Sun, 2023-02-19 09:29
Prayer
Hello, Clentin,
The art and miracle of prayer - the humbleness in asking, and the wisdom and faith in listening. Thank you for this!
L
Clentin
Sun, 2023-02-19 12:12
Thank you. I plan to try more
Thank you. I plan to try more like poems. I also plan to read your poems as well
author commentRosewood Apothecary
Mon, 2023-02-20 12:29
Bout sums it up
“I would choose my own religion, worship my own spirit
But if he ever preached to me I wouldn’t want to hear it
I’d drop him a forgotten god, languishing in shame
And then if I hit stormy seas I’d have myself to blame.”
Tom Marshall
I don’t pray so much. I have faith in abundance.
Nice job
Tim
Jackweb
Thu, 2023-02-23 14:45
The title indeed...
encapsulates the body of the poem. That's what it truly is. Our heart is truly, the communication center between us and God. And we hope for what we ask in prayer to come to fruition. Beautiful poem.
.
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Clentin
Thu, 2023-02-23 15:49
Thank you
Thank you
I try to bring my inner thoughts to light and realization.
Prayer is utmost in my life.
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