The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Mustangs!" presents a vivid narrative that effectively uses imagery to convey a scene of wild horses in a dramatic landscape. The use of words like "silhouettes", "thunderheads", "Silverado mine", and "desolate Nevada" contribute to the creation of a specific, tangible setting.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm and meter. For example, the line "He loads his 30/30" disrupts the rhythm established in the previous lines. Consider revising this line to maintain the flow of the poem.

Moreover, the poem employs a direct narrative style, which is effective in conveying the story. However, it might be beneficial to incorporate more figurative language or symbolism to add depth and layers of meaning to the poem. This could potentially enhance the emotional resonance of the poem and engage readers on a deeper level.

Lastly, the use of punctuation is inconsistent throughout the poem. While the exclamation mark in the title and the last line adds emphasis, the lack of punctuation in other lines can make the poem difficult to read. Consider adding punctuation where necessary to guide the reader through the poem and clarify the intended pauses and breaks.

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..the makings of a country song, I think, considering the long "i" words every other line.
I'm troubled with the line "and gives the herd a sign". It might be better served as "the herd all know the sign" or "her" sign.

Thomas

This is an intriguing poem. The imagery is vivid and clear. So much to feel within this, and I plead ignorance - are there really Mustang poachers? Breaks my heart. But then, you turn it all around with your bold, beautiful ending...
Thank you!
L

people who feel that these mustangs are a nuisance and take over grazing land from the ranchers. They will shoot and trap these amazing creatures. I will be back tomorrow to do some critique here. You asked for it. ~ Geez.
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I think it is ever so lovely. And perfect! A bit of enchantment...

*hugs, Cat