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Marriage

Submitted by Clentin on Fri, 2023-02-24 07:22

She was for me,love
Forever placed within my heart
She was for me strength

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Lavender

Fri, 2023-02-24 09:54

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What a gracious haiku. You both are very fortunate. Is this poem created to mark an anniversary, perhaps?
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Clentin

Fri, 2023-02-24 10:21

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55 years

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Clentin

Fri, 2023-02-24 10:21

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55 years

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Lavender

Fri, 2023-02-24 10:26

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The feeling is well captured in your poem.
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Seren

Fri, 2023-02-24 11:11

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This is just Brilliant, you've written such a beautiful tribute to your love, congratulations on 55yrs that is an amazing achievement in this day and age.

Here is to many more. <3

hugs Jayne x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Clentin

Fri, 2023-02-24 11:15

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Thank you. I will be reading your poetry. I am trying to read as much as I can if the contributors.

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