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Marriage
She was for me,love
Forever placed within my heart
She was for me strength
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Lavender
Fri, 2023-02-24 09:54
Hello, Clentin,
What a gracious haiku. You both are very fortunate. Is this poem created to mark an anniversary, perhaps?
L
Clentin
Fri, 2023-02-24 10:21
55 years
55 years
Clentin
Fri, 2023-02-24 10:21
55 years
55 years
Lavender
Fri, 2023-02-24 10:26
Congratulations!
The feeling is well captured in your poem.
L
Seren
Fri, 2023-02-24 11:11
Dear Clentin
This is just Brilliant, you've written such a beautiful tribute to your love, congratulations on 55yrs that is an amazing achievement in this day and age.
Here is to many more. <3
hugs Jayne x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Clentin
Fri, 2023-02-24 11:15
Thank you. I will be reading
Thank you. I will be reading your poetry. I am trying to read as much as I can if the contributors.