The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively uses vivid imagery and symbolism to convey the theme of the Autumnal Equinox, Mabon, and the rituals associated with it. The rhythm and rhyme scheme provide a pleasing structure that guides the reader through the narrative.

However, there are a few areas where clarity could be improved. For instance, the line "Flammables past their use will do" might be confusing to some readers. It could be beneficial to provide a bit more context or explanation about what these "flammables" are and why they're relevant to the poem's theme.

The transition from the bonfire scene to the indoor scene in the lines "Thinking of the warmth of indoors, the steaming bowls of clam chowder" is a bit abrupt. It might be helpful to provide a smoother transition to help maintain the flow of the poem.

The line "as folk talk a little treason" is intriguing, but it's not clear what it's referring to. If it's an important part of the poem's message or theme, it might be worth expanding on this idea to make its significance clearer to the reader.

Finally, consider the use of punctuation throughout the poem. There are a few instances where punctuation is missing or inconsistent, which can disrupt the rhythm and flow of the poem. For example, the semicolon at the end of the poem seems out of place and could be replaced with a period for consistency.

Overall, the poem effectively captures the spirit of Mabon and the rituals associated with it. With a few tweaks for clarity and consistency, it could be even more impactful.

Please send feedback about Neo (our computer generated critique system) to https://www.neopoet.com/contact

approach the Autumnal Equinox here in the Northern hemisphere, I am well aware of the importance of acknowledging the plentiful harvests and the celebration of many different rites to compliment and mark the efforts of the human race to provide for our families. Traditions are meant to unify us and keep us grounded. The intent of the last line is obvious, with the upcoming elections. I can see that the efforts [and returns] of the numerous elected, might become a factor in whether or not the said-same officials might be re-elected.
Well done. ~ Geez.
.

Happy Fall/Mabon, Cat! The witch's season is upon us with Samhain in the not so far distance. The veils will thin and the spirit world will intertwine with ours. I love how you described the season and the holiday. Bon fires are certainly a favorite of mine. All the festivals and celebrations! Well done!