The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Title: LOVE SONG

Poem text:
I wrote a song for the moon
But because I'm a jealous lover
I did not want the stars to hear it
So I wrote it on a note
And gave it to the breeze

Feedback:

1. Imagery: The poem creates a vivid image of a person writing a song for the moon and attempting to keep it secret from the stars. The use of the breeze as a messenger adds a sense of whimsy and delicacy to the poem.

2. Theme: The theme of love and jealousy is evident in the poem. The speaker's desire to keep their love song exclusive to the moon is an interesting way to convey the intensity of their emotions.

Suggestions for improvement:

1. Expanding the poem: The poem is quite short and could benefit from additional stanzas to further develop the theme and imagery. For example, the speaker could describe the moon's reaction to the song or explore the consequences of the stars discovering the song.

2. Strengthening the metaphor: The poem uses the moon and stars as metaphors for love and jealousy. To make the metaphor more effective, consider adding more details about the relationship between the moon and stars. This could help to create a more engaging and thought-provoking narrative.

3. Enhancing the language: The poem's language is simple and straightforward, which contributes to its charm. However, incorporating more poetic devices, such as alliteration, assonance, or internal rhyme, could add depth and musicality to the poem.

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A captured moment a whimsical thought
-------- poetry.

Obi.

you have said exactly what I was thinking, but having trouble putting down. ~ Geezer.
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Love your Love Song. Its brevity enhances the impact and the association with the moon and the stars, being jealous, really worked. Ruby :)