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The poem "Lost Companion" effectively uses vivid imagery to depict the bond between the speaker and their companion. The choice of words and the rhythm of the poem create a sense of nostalgia and loss, which is a strong emotional appeal.

However, the poem could benefit from a more varied sentence structure. The majority of the lines in the poem follow a similar pattern, which can make the poem feel repetitive. Experimenting with different sentence structures could add more depth and interest to the poem.

The poem also seems to rely heavily on the use of clichés, such as "bees hummed in verdant grass" and "birds sang in leaf clad hedgerows". While these phrases are effective in creating a vivid picture, they are commonly used in poetry and may not provide a unique perspective. The poem could be improved by replacing these clichés with more original descriptions.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from a clearer narrative or theme. While the poem effectively conveys a sense of loss, it's not clear who the lost companion is or what their relationship to the speaker was. Providing more specific details about the companion could make the poem more engaging and emotionally resonant.

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This is beautifully written, Alex! Well done!

my dogs too. I miss my Rugby jumping, splashing and swimming in every little puddle, pond and river.
I also miss the baying of my Beagle-rabbit-dog, Dancer, who hardly ever barked, but had a sweet howl when scenting a rabbit.
How funny it was when she barked the first time; she looked very surprised that it came from her! But she howled with glee at any rabbit. Ha, ha.
My only question is, can you find another word to rhyme with [hares] or [fears], to keep the rhyme perfect?
One of those lines will have to go. Otherwise, a beautiful tribute to a dear friend! ~ Geez.
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even notice the words speak and feet, didn't match, because it is so near-rhyme. The long ee sounds in both, I guess.
The difference in hares and fears is quite pronounced though. I think that you could change the line to say :

"No more to frighten little birds" and the rhyming line:
"No more to hear my words"

Or: "No more to frighten hares [small h]
and: " No more jumping everywhere"

Hope this helps. ~ Geez.
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...what the negative interest in cliché literature is supposed to accomplish, that if it wasn't for cliché, where would nostalgia dwell?
Personally, I enjoyed the better part of the (clichés) in this poem and, if I had any critique to offer, it might rest in the metre, not there.
The language is easy reading and impactful, so that's what I usually look for in my idea of poetry.
Looking forward to seeing any edits, Mr. Alex

Thomas

Hello, Alex,
A beautiful tribute to man's best friend. Precious times and seasons shared. It seems the loving energy they freely give always remains.
Thank you,
L

Very nice poem, really reflects your feelings for those you loved.

I read with a joy that only true companions can know...turning bittersweet. for I had such a companion in my Tosha, a Shepard/greyhound melding... the last verse came and I shed a tear.

*sincerely, Cat

you sure cut to the heart of it! how big is your friend?

*hugs, Cat