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Good Morning
Good morning, I say
As I stretch the sidewalk
Making room for strangers to walk through my day
Leaving but footprints in their wake
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content
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Lord Alfred Tennyson, Robert Frost, Allen Ginsberg, Walt Whitman, Misha Collins, John Donne
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Comments
Kristen H.
Sun, 2023-02-19 09:55
Thank you!
Thanks so much!
author commentCandlewitch
Sun, 2023-02-19 05:57
dear Kristen,
I like the way you think!
*hugs, Cat
*
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Kristen H.
Sun, 2023-02-19 09:55
Thank you!
Thank you very much!
author commentSeren
Sun, 2023-02-19 09:58
Dear Kristen H.
I see my old cat stretching himself over the pavement in the winter sun, I'm probably totally off, but this is an excellent short poem.
I see nothing I would change or edit.
Well done!!
kind regards Seren
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Kristen H.
Sun, 2023-02-19 10:15
Thank you!
Interpretation is always up to the reader. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
author commentSeren
Sun, 2023-02-19 10:22
Exactly, it's the perfection
Exactly, it's the perfection and beauty of poetry it can take us all to different places and times and dimensions.
kindest Regards Seren
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Kristen H.
Sun, 2023-02-19 10:40
Exactly!
Perfectly said.
author commentRosewood Apothecary
Mon, 2023-02-20 10:31
Super job
I love simple observations turned poetry. Love this.
Tim
Kristen H.
Mon, 2023-02-20 12:59
Thank you!
Thank you very much!!
author commentLeslie
Wed, 2024-01-24 21:08
Simply beautiful in all its
Simply beautiful in all its implications. Feel free to message me if you feel comfortable.
The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!
Kristen H.
Wed, 2024-01-24 21:28
Thank you
Thank you so much, Leslie!
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