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The full moon

The full moon sign
leading through
the entrance night
with a round figure shape
in a subtle silver sparkle shine
on a late-night cold winter bleak

Carrying in a brilliance trace
rise above the ocean wave
with its mirror reflection stay
across the dark presence stage
through the slow-motion weight
in her glamorous display face

Exude in her beaming gaze
with the radiant scenery pose
In silence, she remains
with a mesmerizing image
of a spectacular view

From the splendor showcase
it fills the lonely soul
with a sense of glow
that instilled with a
capturing of elated

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The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem, "The Full Moon," presents vivid and evocative imagery that successfully captures the beauty and mystique of a full moon. However, there are areas where the poem could be improved.

Firstly, the poem could benefit from more consistent use of grammatical structures. For instance, the phrase "the entrance night" could be rephrased for clarity. Perhaps "the night's entrance" or "the entrance of the night" would convey the intended meaning more effectively.

Secondly, the poem's rhythm could be enhanced. The current structure of the poem is somewhat irregular, which can disrupt the flow of the piece. Consider revising the poem with a more consistent rhythm in mind to create a smoother reading experience.

Lastly, the poem's language is quite abstract, which can make it difficult for readers to connect with the poem on a deeper level. While the use of abstract language can contribute to the poem's overall sense of mystery and allure, consider incorporating more concrete imagery or sensory details to ground the poem and make it more relatable to readers.

In conclusion, while the poem effectively conveys the beauty of a full moon, improvements could be made in terms of grammar, rhythm, and the balance between abstract and concrete language.

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