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Dreams

Submitted by Clentin on Fri, 2023-04-28 09:16

Dreams refresh our minds
Their images are fleeting
But give us relief

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neopoet

Fri, 2023-04-28 09:16

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The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

"Dreams" is a short but sweet poem that encapsulates the power and importance of dreams in our lives. The author emphasizes how dreams can refresh our minds and offer us relief, even if their images are fleeting.

One suggestion for a line edit would be to add a more descriptive adjective to "images." For example, "Their vivid images are fleeting" or "Their haunting images are fleeting" could add more depth and specificity to the poem.

Overall, "Dreams" is a lovely reminder of the restorative power of our unconscious thoughts and how they can offer us solace and rejuvenation.

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Geezer

Fri, 2023-04-28 15:48

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that the AI doesn't consider Haiku or the rules of such as 'real' poetry? I see you Clentin. ~ Geezer.
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Clentin

Fri, 2023-04-28 16:05

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Right.I see that.

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