The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Depression Bites" is a poignant expression of the struggle with mental health issues. The use of contrasting imagery with the bright sun and rain behind the eyes effectively conveys the inner turmoil experienced by the speaker. The self-deprecating tone of the second stanza highlights the damaging effects of comparing oneself to others, especially in the age of social media.

The line "My whole existence is absurd" captures the sense of hopelessness experienced by those struggling with depression. However, the final stanza offers a glimmer of hope and resilience with the line "Warpaint on shoulders back / Head held high to the end."

One suggested line edit would be to replace "mess up like a boss" in the third stanza with a more specific example of a talent or skill to further showcase the speaker's abilities.

Overall, "Depression Bites" is a powerful and relatable poem that sheds light on the often stigmatized topic of mental health.

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I agree with the AI's assessment and I think that you have done a great job of letting people know how you feel.
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