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The poem effectively uses imagery and metaphor to express a sense of longing and melancholy during the holiday season, a time typically associated with joy and togetherness. The juxtaposition of festive elements like the elf and the Christmas tree with the speaker's emotional turmoil creates a poignant contrast.

However, there are a few areas that could be improved. The phrase "holiday movies run ramped" seems to be a misuse of the term "ramped." Perhaps the poet intended to use "rampant," which would fit better in this context.

The line "If that is even a thing, I'm not sure" breaks from the poem's otherwise consistent rhythm and tone. It introduces a casual, conversational language that feels out of place. Consider revising this line to maintain the poem's overall mood and style.

The last stanza introduces the image of an angel with "glass eyes" and "porcelain hands." This is a compelling image, but it's introduced quite late in the poem. Consider weaving this image throughout the poem to create a more cohesive narrative thread.

The poem's exploration of loneliness and longing during the holiday season is a compelling theme. With some revisions, this poem could more effectively communicate its poignant message.

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your nostalgic poem is just the thing I needed to read today...it breaks away from the the wide-eyed little girl and brings about a mature outlook. there is a sadness in the growth from girl to woman. innocence falls away and cannot be regained. that is the price we pay... my favorite lines are:

Looking at the angel atop the tree
Through glass eyes, she watches
With porcelain hands outstretched
Will there be a Christmas miracle for me

a damned good poem!
*love, Cat

Hello, Carrie,
Heartrending words. The holidays can be trying and disappointing. As I get older, I try not to add to the stress and unrealistic expectations of the season. I try to be true to myself and sincere with my intentions. It sounds like you are facing some "truth," too. Your language is intense, and yet has a beautiful honesty to it.
Warmest wishes for that Christmas miracle!
Lx

Holidays can be rough esp if you are missing someone. There should be a phone line esp for this time of year. 365 - 12 there are so many days to be thankful as well. Just keep making your own holiday traditions and hopefully this season will pass. Wish you well this season.