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TWO TOILETS
Two toilets guard a driveway's start
and both of them filled up with dirt
so odd they gave me a mild start
And then I grinned so wide it hurt
on seeing flowers start to sprout
Then I nearly wet my pants
When Susan took time to explain
what I beheld were"potted" plants
I laughed so hard it hurt my brain!
and now I guess that I'll sign out
serious poem from serious poet lmao........stan
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
another not ready for prime time poem lol
Editing stage:
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Comments
wesley snow
Tue, 2012-01-31 13:08
The intensity and counterpoint...
... in this work nearly brought tears to my eyes. Surely one of your most emotional creations.
"Potted" huh? wesley
W. H. Snow
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scribbler
Tue, 2012-01-31 13:30
Hi Wes
You really had to dig deep to find this one lol. I was on verge of unpublishing it due to lack of interest.......stan
infinite_dwarf
Wed, 2012-02-01 17:57
Stan
Well I thought it was 1.) Hilarious and 2.) a good idea. Expensive idea, but good nonetheless.
scribbler
Wed, 2012-02-01 23:57
Hi Jess
I reckon they thought growing marijuana in them would be redundant lol...........stan
infinite_dwarf
Thu, 2012-02-02 14:19
Stan
A "pot" trifecta?? Potted pot in pots (toilet sometimes called a/the pot). Whoo!
scribbler
Thu, 2012-02-02 16:45
well......
Could be a pot quadfecta. For the house driveway led to had gone to pot lol.........stan
wesley snow
Fri, 2012-02-03 21:44
You guys need something to do...
... wesley
W. H. Snow
A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley
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scribbler
Fri, 2012-02-03 22:49
yes
Let's gather ingredients for POTporrie................