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TWO TOILETS

Two toilets guard a driveway's start
and both of them filled up with dirt
so odd they gave me a mild start
And then I grinned so wide it hurt
on seeing flowers start to sprout

Then I nearly wet my pants
When Susan took time to explain
what I beheld were"potted" plants
I laughed so hard it hurt my brain!
and now I guess that I'll sign out

serious poem from serious poet lmao........stan

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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another not ready for prime time poem lol
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... in this work nearly brought tears to my eyes. Surely one of your most emotional creations.
"Potted" huh? wesley

W. H. Snow

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You really had to dig deep to find this one lol. I was on verge of unpublishing it due to lack of interest.......stan

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Well I thought it was 1.) Hilarious and 2.) a good idea. Expensive idea, but good nonetheless.

I reckon they thought growing marijuana in them would be redundant lol...........stan

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A "pot" trifecta?? Potted pot in pots (toilet sometimes called a/the pot). Whoo!

Could be a pot quadfecta. For the house driveway led to had gone to pot lol.........stan

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... wesley

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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Let's gather ingredients for POTporrie................

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