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The Devil's Brain
I am lost deep inside the Devil's brain
Makes me feel like I am so deranged
Fire is burning hot inside of my head
Turns my conscience into ashes of dread
Darkness is devouring my inner thoughts
They are tying me down with evil knots
Internal suffering from vicious pain
Stuck deep inside the Devil's brain
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rula
Tue, 2022-11-22 13:25
Hello D
This is compelling in a way and yet well written.
It absolutely helps when we are able to put our raging feelings in words .
We are here good listeners anytime, so never hesitate to share
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Depressed 1
Wed, 2022-11-23 01:35
Thanks
Thanks Rula I will keep that in mind.
https://www.artofelpaso.com/
Geezer
Tue, 2022-11-22 16:24
A cry for help...
in the night. It helps to know, that there are others out there. We are all in this together. Keep writing and we will keep listening.
~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Depressed 1
Wed, 2022-11-23 01:36
Thanks
Thanks Geezer. Writing helps a lot.
https://www.artofelpaso.com/
Eden Guthrie
Wed, 2022-11-23 00:26
can't stop reading it
This is like one of the best ones I've read to be honest. I love the structure and how it feels so effortless and just plain truth.
Depressed 1
Wed, 2022-11-23 01:37
Thanks
Thanks Eden. I look forward to reading your writings.
https://www.artofelpaso.com/