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The Devil's Brain

Submitted by Depressed 1 on Tue, 2022-11-22 02:30

I am lost deep inside the Devil's brain

Makes me feel like I am so deranged

Fire is burning hot inside of my head

Turns my conscience into ashes of dread

Darkness is devouring my inner thoughts

They are tying me down with evil knots

Internal suffering from vicious pain

Stuck deep inside the Devil's brain

Review Request (Intensity):

Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing stage:

Editing - polished draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Rula

Tue, 2022-11-22 13:25

Hello D

This is compelling in a way and yet well written.
It absolutely helps when we are able to put our raging feelings in words .
We are here good listeners anytime, so never hesitate to share

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Depressed 1

Wed, 2022-11-23 01:35

Thanks

Thanks Rula I will keep that in mind.

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Geezer

Tue, 2022-11-22 16:24

A cry for help...

in the night. It helps to know, that there are others out there. We are all in this together. Keep writing and we will keep listening.
~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Depressed 1

Wed, 2022-11-23 01:36

Thanks

Thanks Geezer. Writing helps a lot.

https://www.artofelpaso.com/

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Eden Guthrie

Wed, 2022-11-23 00:26

can't stop reading it

This is like one of the best ones I've read to be honest. I love the structure and how it feels so effortless and just plain truth.

Depressed 1

Wed, 2022-11-23 01:37

Thanks

Thanks Eden. I look forward to reading your writings.

https://www.artofelpaso.com/

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