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Wonder

Submitted by Clentin on Tue, 2023-03-21 03:25

We often wonder what life is all about
Thinking, seeking, full of doubt

Do we seek our goals and desires
Or try to achieve what God inspires

Acting with selfish madness
We often end in virtual sadness

Always reaping pleasures with great skill
Neglecting what is in God’s will

Filling days with serious prayer
Will fill our lives with love and care

We no longer wonder what life is about
When we follow God’s planned route

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Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Tue, 2023-03-21 10:10

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is not often seen to be of particular interest or importance to some. However, it should always be allowed respect. What is God? Hmmm... I think that remains to be ascertained by the devotee. Nice work, however. ~ Geezer.
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Jackweb

Tue, 2023-03-21 11:22

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You achieved some good rhymes here with aa,bb.
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Clentin

Tue, 2023-03-21 11:49

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Thank you. I am trying all sorts of types. Hope to get better

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