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Winter (Cinquain)

Submitted by Clentin on Sat, 2023-12-02 20:17

Jack Frost
Cold winds, white snow
Blowing across the days
Requiring hats and warm clothing
Winter

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Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Unca Fez

Sat, 2023-12-02 21:17

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I had to look this one up. The form was inspired by Adelaide Crapsey. Thanks for helping me expand my knowledge of poetry. Nicely done. Quite fitting for northern Wisconsin. :)

Thanx,
Steve

Clentin

Sun, 2023-12-03 00:27

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Thank you for reading. I too had to look up various forms of poetry. I use this web site:

http://www.shadowpoetry.com/

Great resource.

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2023-12-03 05:35

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Your poem made me shiver! Thank goodness I have a toasty warm fireplace to sit in front of! Good work!

* hugs, Cat

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Clentin

Sun, 2023-12-03 07:16

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Thank you Cat. I appreciate your reading and comments.

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