The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "A Very Greedy Christmas" effectively uses vivid imagery and a consistent rhyme scheme to communicate its themes of consumerism and parental responsibility. However, there are areas where the clarity and impact of the poem could be improved.

The opening stanza sets a festive scene with the reference to "colors green and red" and "sugar plums", but the phrase "vapid little heads" is somewhat ambiguous. It's unclear whether this is referring to the children or the sugar plums, and this ambiguity may detract from the intended message.

The second stanza introduces the concept of the "gimme generation" and their obsession with material goods. This is a strong statement, but it could be made more powerful with the use of more specific imagery. For example, instead of the vague "catalogs full of toys", the poem could mention specific types of toys or brands to create a more concrete picture of the consumerism it criticizes.

The third and fourth stanzas shift the focus to the aftermath of this greed, with "junk in corners" and "mourners" who "reduce the rubble". The transition between these stanzas is a bit abrupt, and it might be beneficial to include a bridge stanza to more smoothly guide the reader from the joy of receiving gifts to the aftermath.

The final stanza introduces the idea of parental responsibility in the spoiling of children. The phrase "did you have a hand in casting that di(ce)?" is a clever play on words, but the use of parentheses around the "ce" may be unnecessary and could potentially confuse the reader.

Overall, the poem could benefit from clearer imagery, smoother transitions, and a more straightforward use of language. These changes could help to more effectively communicate the poem's themes and increase its impact on the reader.

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on the darkside. I'm sure that this thought runs through many grandparents and parent's heads.
The last word in the last line; is supposed to be [die], the singular of dice, but I'm sure that many people
don't know that and would be confused with the word die; thinking that you meant to cease living.
I'm not sure that the way you have presented it will make a whole lot of difference, but it is a valiant attempt.
Well done. ~ Geez.
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A well-constructed comment on the Christmas philosophy of Mayor Augustus Maywho or Vernon, Petunia, and Dudley Dursley! It is unfortunate that it seems to be shared by so many.

I was a spoiled child at Christmas. My parents never took out a loan or went broke but I was their only adopted child that took them years to have so I was afforded much during that time of year. I will say I received many needs such as clothes and shoes but there were also wants and always a special gift from my dad that my mom knew nothing about. No matter how old I was, that gift was always from Santa. I tried to do the same for mine even though theirs are a bit smaller as there are three and cost of living is what it is. They don't get much during the year so Christmas was a time to let loose if possible. None are believers anymore but still enjoy a small tradition of wearing matching pajamas on Christmas Eve and having their photos taken together in front of our tree...which is a black one this year...we used the Halloween tree for fun. I feel like I was always appreciative though because I knew of many who didn't have those opportunities and it was never expected. About children running loose in restaurant or stores...as a parent and patron, I find it soooo frustrating especially as I get older.

from my mother and grandmother, that if you wanted to be around adults, you were polite, and unobtrusive.
If you were very quiet, and pretended to be uninterested, you might learn some interesting stuff; [my own observation].
My mother was the disciplinarian, as my father; [who could rarely be bothered] would go overboard.
I didn't get "the shoe" but a couple of times; you know, those low-flat-heeled shoes? But yeah... I understand even better now about how kids will go feral, if unattended, Remember "Lord of the Flies?" ~ Geez.
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