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ticking clocks
New Year’s Eve:
clocks come to halt
and start again.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words:
Happy New Year to everyone! Let’s hope that 2022 shall be the end of this awful pandemic state that we all live in, and let it be the most healthy, creative and awesome year!
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Triskelion
Fri, 2021-12-31 14:34
Happy New Year
to you and everyone else as well!
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Jackweb
Sat, 2022-01-01 23:06
This is called tercet or triplet
A poetic unit of three lines can get your eyes glued, mind and thought to read aloud and try to unveil the entire body of a poem.
Tercet or triplet is fancy, apt and very understandable.
Onyinyechi Cosmos
arjiris.f.
Mon, 2022-01-03 11:30
This short poems are my
This short poems are my favourite genre! Have a nice year!
author commentGeezer
Sun, 2022-01-02 08:47
Nice job...
on the tercet! It gives the whole meaning to the poem! ~ Geezer.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?
arjiris.f.
Mon, 2022-01-03 11:26
Thank you! Have a nice year!
Thank you! Have a nice year!
author commentscribbler
Sun, 2022-01-02 15:33
Hmmmm....Hmmmmm......
I keep wanting to read about a pause before the clock resumes. Don't know Why but you might play around with working in a pause and see if you like it better.
arjiris.f.
Mon, 2022-01-03 11:29
The halt and the restart of
The halt and the restart of the clocks on New Year’s Eve have been a kind of childhood memory or dream to me, as my grandmother used to tell it to me when she fed me hot milk. Have a nice year!
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