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Sunlight

Submitted by Clentin on Fri, 2023-12-15 08:25

Sunlight paints the sky,
Golden hues bid night goodbye,
A new day unfurls.

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Contest: 
Neopoem Weekly 12/11/23 to 12/16/23
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Fri, 2023-12-15 10:22

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Beautiful imagery, Clentin! Love this!
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Clentin

Fri, 2023-12-15 10:35

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Thank you. I appreciate your comment and for reading my poetry attempts.

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2023-12-15 10:43

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I really like it, especially the last line!

*Many hugs, Cat

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Clentin

Fri, 2023-12-15 10:45

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Thank you Cat. My latest attemplt of writing short poetry.

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2023-12-15 10:51

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It seems that you really have a knack for this kind of poetry!

*happy Yule, Cat

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Clentin

Fri, 2023-12-15 11:34

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Thanks, I am try8ng variouscforms

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Unca Fez

Fri, 2023-12-15 15:01

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This format seems to appeal to the engineer in me. The efficiency of it. You seem to have taken to it very well. Nicely done. Great imagery.

Thanx,
Steve

Clentin

Fri, 2023-12-15 15:27

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Thank you very much

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