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Smiles

Submitted by Clentin on Thu, 2023-03-09 03:31

A look that moves lips
Shows bright teeth gleaming inside
Changing how we feel??

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Thu, 2023-03-09 18:07

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Hello, Clentin,
I read this lovely poem two wonderful ways: someone is looking at the subject, causing them to smile and change their feelings, or the subject is smiling at someone and causing that person to change their feelings. Either way, giving and receiving smiles really does spread positive feelings.
Thank you!
L

Clentin

Thu, 2023-03-09 18:50

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Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I found that smiling changes my feelings but at the same time also affects other and their feelings.
Thank you

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