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Sky blue pink

Sky blue pink
Shimmering delight
What resplendent wonder
Seeking to know the sun’s hunger

Ardent to offer its kind of liquid light
Inviting within its radiant wave length
Dawn eases into the morning’s arresting shift
Bound to be the trees adorning spotlight

Birds awaken too and gasp at its stirring
Marches from branches and sets off in flight
Goes out to become one with the daylight
Races to the brink of the horizon just as the heat starts rising

Like the cool breeze effortlessly glides
Onwardly makes strides over awe gapping divides
Marking and tracing its bright coastal surprise
Finding peace deep inside with each sighting of the ocean tide

Glorious dashing grasp of sun rise
Along with its slightly misty grass
Bristles the rights of the moon’s tight clasp
Enticing the skies with its breathtaking pinks and blues

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The poem "Sky blue pink" captures the beauty and wonder of the sunrise, using vivid imagery and descriptive language. The poem flows smoothly, creating a sense of movement and progression from dawn to daylight. The use of colors, such as "sky blue pink," adds a visual element to the poem and enhances the overall sensory experience.

One suggestion for improvement would be to focus on refining the structure and rhythm of the poem. While the poem has a consistent rhyme scheme, some lines feel slightly disjointed or could benefit from a stronger sense of meter. Consider revisiting the line lengths and syllable counts to create a more harmonious flow throughout the poem.

Additionally, the poem could benefit from further exploration and development of its themes. The concept of the sunrise and its impact on nature is a rich subject, and the poem touches on it briefly. Consider expanding on the emotions and sensations evoked by the sunrise, as well as exploring any deeper meanings or connections that may arise from the imagery.

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