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Rainbow Mountains

Submitted by Clentin on Mon, 2023-03-06 02:17

Once covered with ice
Red ,white,gold, blue, ground appears
Revealing God’s work

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

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Mr joghe

Mon, 2023-03-06 06:06

Dear poet,

Dear poet,
I like your three lines poem.

"Words are currency of ideas and have the power to change world. Ride your pen on the rough road."

Clentin

Mon, 2023-03-06 08:19

Thank you. I appreciate you

Thank you. I appreciate you comments

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Rosewood Apothecary

Mon, 2023-03-06 06:24

Nice!

Cool title. Good Haiku. Sneaking the colors in that 7 syllable line was a good choice. It is a classical Haiku in that we’ve got the theme of nature and a “cutting” word.

Tim

Clentin

Mon, 2023-03-06 08:20

Thank you. I now see that the

Thank you. I now see that the Andes mountain chain is now colored since the ice has melted

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RoseBlack

Mon, 2023-03-06 18:36

Nice imagery

Rainbows are surely a beautiful sight and imagining them in mountain form gives off such amazing imagery.

~RoseBlack~

Clentin

Mon, 2023-03-06 19:25

Thank you. There are the

Thank you. There are the rainbow mountains in Peru that are real and can now be seen after the ice had melted

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