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Miracles!

Submitted by Leslie on Sat, 2023-02-25 21:00

Miracles are found
In the darkest night
And are bound to return
In the brightest light
You can feel them passing
Through your heart
A simple sign
God has played a part
The part of compassion and empathy
That give our spirits rest
To release our inmost feelings
Whether we understand or not
They turn into good deeds
Which pass through our hands
With the receipt of peace
As we humbly
Kneel at His feet!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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This was written to emphasize my personal beliefs about who my higher power is and what he expects of me!
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Leslie

Sat, 2023-02-25 21:11

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This was written to remind me of who I believe my higher power is (GOD) and what He expects of me!

The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!

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Seren

Sat, 2023-02-25 22:57

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Whatever your faith to hold with hope is something I think we try to do as human beings, even if there are no Gods and there is nothing in the hereafter, to continue to meditate in prayer can be healing and grounding, I do a form of it every day, it's good for mental health and if your struggling with something in your life, I have seen miracles we all have, the lives that are saved from some tragedy that by rights should have ended their life, saved by rescuer's that keep going even when all hope is lost in others, to see someone beat a cancer that was terminal, we are surrounded by miracles every day. I have been the recipient of a miracle; I shouldn't be here today but here I am..

I liked your poem its thought provoking sorry about the short story for a comment.

Kind regards Jayne

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Leslie

Sun, 2023-02-26 06:41

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Although I'm not struggling at the moment, I appreciate your kind comments. I have found a wellspring of relief in having
people such as yourself and others. People who have taken an interest in my thoughts and writings. My desire is to illuminate and educate the minds of everyone that I can concerning mental illness. Thanks again for taking interest in my writing. I love your work and feel honored that you would take the time for my myopic paradigm. Having said this
I can assure you that I am very aware of this phenomena In my life and the lives of many friends and others surrounding me every day. Thanks again for your valuable thoughts!

The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!

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