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Hospice

Submitted by Clentin on Sat, 2023-03-18 19:56

Care issued daily
Giving a final prayer
With Family’s love

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Sat, 2023-03-18 21:46

A good piece...

describing at home care for the critically ill. I think everyone would want a caretaker like described. Someone who takes care of the patient with love and respect. BTW, [Hospice] ~ Geezer.
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Clentin

Sun, 2023-03-19 02:35

Thank you. In life we will or

Thank you. In life we will or already have experienced the last days if those we loved

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Clentin

Sun, 2023-03-19 02:37

Thank you for your comments.

Thank you for your comments. I am not an experienced poem writer. You mentioned to eliminate the caps in the poem.
What us the correct capitalisation for poems?
Thank you

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Lavender

Sat, 2023-03-18 23:21

Hospice

Hello, Clentin,
Anyone familiar with hospice care understands how your words could be so brief, yet hold so much. I find them to be healing. Very tender.
L

Clentin

Sun, 2023-03-19 02:39