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Hope (rhyming haiku)

Submitted by Clentin on Sat, 2023-11-18 06:35

A light here to stay
Within my soul every day
Showing me the way

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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RoseBlack

Sat, 2023-11-18 07:12

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Yet says a lot. I really like Haiku and I like how yours rhymes. Well done.

~RoseBlack~

Clentin

Sat, 2023-11-18 07:14

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Thank you Rose, I appreciate your reading and your comments.
PS: love your poems

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RoseBlack

Sat, 2023-11-18 07:25

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I always appreciate your feedback

~RoseBlack~

Tawny023

Sat, 2023-11-18 21:53

Just a few words and so illuminating

Clentin

Sun, 2023-11-19 03:04

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Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it very much

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Clentin

Sun, 2023-11-19 03:06

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Yes I know that there is no real form of rhyming haiku. I just wanted to try rhyming my poem.
Thank you for your comments.

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Clentin

Sun, 2023-11-19 06:56

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Thanks

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