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Title: Grounded

Review:

The poem "Grounded" effectively captures a moment of intense fear and uncertainty during a natural disaster. The imagery and sensory details used throughout the poem help to create a vivid and immersive experience for the reader. The structure of the poem, with its short lines and fragmented thoughts, adds to the sense of chaos and disorientation.

One aspect that could be strengthened in this poem is the use of figurative language. While the straightforward and descriptive language effectively conveys the physical experience of the earthquake, incorporating metaphors or similes could add another layer of depth and meaning to the poem. For example, comparing the sound of the sirens to a haunting melody or the destruction of the surroundings to a shattered dream could enhance the emotional impact of the poem.

Additionally, the poem could benefit from further exploration of the speaker's emotions and thoughts during the ordeal. While the panic and fear are briefly mentioned, delving deeper into the speaker's internal struggle and reflection could provide a more

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Hello, Kristen,
Interesting! I have two personal reactions to this. One, a literal description of a tornado hitting, as we've all seen the destruction they cause, and read about the miracle survivors. And two, a great mental or emotional fear - illness, death, aging... I think one of the best things about this poem is its thought-provoking title. Very clever!
Thank you!
L

My first impression was that it was an earthquake. I've never experienced one, but I can imagine what it must be like. Living in the Midwest, I have experience with what tornadoes can do, so there is a bit more fear for them than for an earthquake. Translating that kind of fear to an earthquake allows me to feel the emotions your poem exposes.

I liked your poem because it expresses true emotions to a natural disaster.
I can’t imagine the structures that protect us daily could in a matter of minutes disappear

Good poem