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Full Moon

Submitted by Clentin on Fri, 2024-01-12 12:41

Majestic and mysterious,
it floats in celestial beauty,
illuminating the night,
with its radiant light.

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Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2024-01-12 12:52

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I do not know which poetic form you have employed but, it is lovely to be sure!

*may peace be yours, Cat

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Clentin

Fri, 2024-01-12 12:56

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Thank you.
Just a few thoughts put to mind. I was not thinking of any form.

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2024-01-12 12:58

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Well, I think it is Brilliant!

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Geezer

Fri, 2024-01-12 13:16

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Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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Clentin

Fri, 2024-01-12 13:26

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Are you referring to Al. If so, I see the same messages about imagery, more examples etc. it does not take into consideration the feelings of the poet, his words, his imagery. And sometimes does not sense the type of poem written if not simp”e haiku or free verse

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Clentin

Sun, 2024-01-14 14:10

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Thank you! Thank you for reading.

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RoseBlack

Sun, 2024-01-14 15:37

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Captures the magic and mystery of the moon. Well done.

~RoseBlack~

Clentin

Sun, 2024-01-14 15:47

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Thank you very much,

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