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Failure

Submitted by Clentin on Mon, 2023-02-06 14:39

As hard as I try I’m unsuccessful
Of amending my faults
Promises, words and prayers
Don’t yield successful results
But only continue to affirm my
Weaknesses and add to my
Grief and sadness

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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RoseBlack

Mon, 2023-02-06 17:56

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Such a sad, honest write. We are all a work in progress and flawed. The fact that you keep trying to improve yourself says something! Good job.

~RoseBlack~

Clentin

Mon, 2023-02-06 18:21

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Thank you. Just a comment on the difficulty improvement

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Rosewood Apothecary

Tue, 2023-02-07 20:57

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I started “healing” like 3 years ago. It’s just a long process and it’s like playing a sport or an instrument, you have to practice and fail a lot before you get decent at it. Just hang in there.

Tim

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