The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Faces of the Wind" captures the varied emotions and experiences that come with encountering wind. The speaker acknowledges the dual nature of wind, which can both give and take away, betray and gift. The metaphor of wind as a force that guides and challenges is well-developed throughout the poem.

One suggested line edit is in the second stanza, where "gifts it gives" could be changed to "gifts it brings" for added clarity and variation in language.

The poem also effectively contrasts those who resist the wind with those who embrace it, showing the different attitudes people can have towards challenges and change. The inclusion of sailors and the homeless adds depth to the poem by showing how wind can affect people's lives in different ways.

The use of personification in the line "I have heard the wind tell gentle tales" adds a touch of whimsy to the poem, while the line "Bringing strong souls to their knees" shows the power and unpredictability of wind. The final stanza brings the poem together by acknowledging the transient nature of wind and its ability to bring about change.

Overall, "Faces of the Wind" is a well-crafted poem that uses metaphor and imagery effectively to explore the complexities of human experience.

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Hello, William,
An encouraging, inspiring poem. Lovely and full of wisdom. I agree with AI regarding "gifts" and "gives" being connected at that point. Maybe change one of them to an alternative word, especially since that line is not part of the rhyme scheme. I also tripped just a tad at "As lofty goals they do attack," but maybe that's just me. I love the word "lofty" used in the poem - brings images of heaven, wings soaring freely in the breeze. Wonderful title, and the pace, rhyme and rhythm of the poem are nice and tight. Your well wishes in your last few words are so generous and kind. Thank you, and may they be returned!
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The rhyme scheme is great, the language is good and the poem is well done, overall. I am sorry to see that you are not currently editing, because I think you should always leave room for improvement. I agree that there is a way to improve that line spoken of by both the AI and Lavender. I don't see a problem with the line, "As lofty goals they do attack". It says the right thing and with the right meter. ~ Geezer.
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I loved this poem for its approach and meanings. I think the AI got it right in highlighting your use of metaphor and imagery, thre are some very touching points. Really good poem, Ruby :)