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Dream stars
Dream stars
I forgot with the morning breeze
in a dream window
in one decorated with sapphires
and emerald flowers sky
Somewhere far in the river
people like birds
hid in the shadows, alone
The first rays engulfed with fire
Our names in
trunks of large trees
at the first of farewell time
Dream stars dimmed by light
in the depths of infinity they are lost sweet
soul roses golden
Αστρόνειρα
Ξεχάστηκα με το αεράκι του πρωινού
σε ένα παράθυρο ονείρων
στολισμένο με ζαφειρένια
και σμαραγδένια του ουρανού άνθη
Κάπου μακριά στο ποτάμι
οι άνθρωποι σαν τα πουλιά
κρύφθηκαν στις σκιές μονάχοι
Οι πρώτες αχτίνες χάραξαν με φωτιά
Τα ονόματα μας στους
κορμούς των μεγάλων δένδρων
την ώρα της αγαπης
Αστρόνειρα θαμπωμένα με φως
Χάνονται γλυκά στο βάθος του απείρου
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Rula
Tue, 2022-12-27 11:06
Hello Eftichia
Some wonderful images through out. Sad sentiments can be felt between the lines.
I had problem with S.4 last two lines in the order of the words
in the depths of infinity they are lost sweet
soul roses golden
May be
In the depths of infinity they are lost
sweet souls rose golden
Thanks for sharing. I see you are bilingual?
Looking forward to reading more of your works.
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Eftichia1
Tue, 2022-12-27 13:54
Thank you very much for your
Thank you very much for your warm words, I usually write with images, colors, and soul roses eternal Yes, that's right, this is related to the concept "in the depths of infinity they are lost sweet
soul roses golden"
Definitely following you Thanks for the link
author commentLavender
Tue, 2022-12-27 19:06
Dream Stars
I interpret this to be the loss of the wonder and beauty of stars as they are dimmed by the morning light and the day is beginning. Beautiful language and poetic wording throughout.
Thank you!
L
Eftichia1
Wed, 2022-12-28 16:27
Good evening Thank you too my
Good evening Thank you too my lovely Lavender
Merry Christmas and Happy New year with hapinness Your comment is my breath of my poetry
God bless you
author commentRosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2022-12-28 06:39
Gorgeous imagery
As per your usual style. This particular theme always piques my senses and so I salute you for that alone. You always have nice rhythm and of course the deep metaphorical images.
Excellent
Tim
Eftichia1
Wed, 2022-12-28 16:31
Yes the natural beauty of the
Yes the natural beauty of the soul with the eyes of the soul that create colorful images and scatter around me Thank you for reading my poem It is an honor for me
The sensitivity and coherence of emotions sometimes overflow HAPPY NEW YEAR TIM
author commentEftichia1
Wed, 2022-12-28 16:35
FOR ALL MY FRIENDS HERE THANKS FOR THE HUG OF LOVE
I paint the days
with the words of the heart
what words mean
sounds giant, on the lips
that tie the kisses
like morning jasmine
where wake sleepily
from kisses
in the passing of the Sun
author commentRoseBlack
Thu, 2022-12-29 20:49
Excellent write
I like your use of language...such vivid imagery here. My favorite line was the last. something about the image of a a golden rose floating like ones soul...well done.
~RoseBlack~
Eftichia1
Fri, 2022-12-30 14:50
Thank you so much my dearest
Thank you so much my dearest Roseblack
I'm glad you like it The soul has such deep sweetness and searching Happy and happy new year 2023
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