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Dreamings

Born beauties
dream taller
a beautiful sight
the stars in our homes
spineless children dreamer
unruly rays that escaped
from the throne of the Sun
our warm

Our years in harmony
wheel asleep
sweet error
the bonds of ethereal
and that the dawn
separate star
awake in our eyes

golden smiles
flowers dream
spoils the moonlit
sky of love

brilliant colors
dreams uninhabited
divided
dreamers of the eyelashes
resting

ΟΝΕΙΡΟΠΟΛΗΜΑ

Γεννιούνται οι ομορφιές
το όνειρο ψηλώνει
σε όμορφα βλέμματα
τα άστρα οι κατοικίες μας
άβουλα παιδιά ονειροπόλα
απείθαρχες αχτίνες που ξέφυγαν
από του Ήλιου τον θρόνο
μας ζεσταίνουν

Τα χρόνια μας στην αρμονία
ρόδα κοιμισμένα
γλυκιά η πλάνη
αέρινα τα δεσμά της
και εκείνο το αυγινό
ξεχωριστό άστρο
ξάγρυπνο στα μάτια μας

Χρυσά χαμόγελα
ανθάκια ονείρων
λάφυρα στο φεγγαρόλουστο
ουρανό του έρωτα

Λαμπρά χρώματα
όνειρα ακατοίκητα
μοιρασμένα
στων ονειροπόλων
τα ματόκλαδα ξαποσταίνουν

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Comments

I see that needs a little sprucing up is:
spineless children dreamer[s]

Our warm[th]

[of] separate stars

Otherwise, it makes a pretty picture, and I like the sense of unity. ~ Geezer.
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A million thanks my dearest Geezer

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been waiting for the edit! ~ Geezer.
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