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Devastated

You say you're devastated that I left.

You weren’t
“devastated”
Red-faced
In my face
Manipulation.

You weren’t
“devastated”
Daughter
Needs attention
Medically.
“You’re fine.”

You weren’t
“devastated”
Daughter
“Please save my life”
You turned away.

You weren’t
“devastated”
Daughter
Self-harm
“Please help me”
"Talk to someone
Not me."

You weren’t
“devastated”
Daughter
Ocean-drowned
Attempted Homicide
Take him out to lunch after.

But now,
You’re
“Devastated”
Now,
Because you’re caught.

You needed us.

We masked your weakness
Hid your deficiencies
Lies,
White and cold.

I belong to me now.
My breath is my own
And I will say what I please.

I will speak no more lies
Of the pain you have caused,
The ruin you have left in your wake.

I no longer serve you.
Sit on your throne
Of bones
Alone.

You deserve nothing from me
Except for the truth.
You’re dead to me.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
There is no rhyme or rhythm to this. Just the truth I needed to direct to paper one night.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Explicit Content

Comments

your poem blew me away... it sounds like you are saving your own life in saying "NO" to an over-acting drama queen. now you can have guilt & drama vacation away from it. your head will feel more clear. but don't give in to the panic this person will try to induce in you and bid for your pity.

hold you're own
*hugs, Cat

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Thank you so much! The scenarios in this poem are true, and I have since removed that person from my life entirely. It was a difficult decision but one that I don't regret. I have never felt more peaceful. Thank you for your feedback!!! :)

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I am so very glad to read that the menace is gone fro your life! Congratulations!

*hugs, Cat

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