The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Dear John" captures the pain of a long-distance relationship. The speaker expresses their longing for their partner, who is overseas, and their inability to cope with the distance any longer. The use of short, simple sentences conveys the speaker's emotional turmoil and their desire for comfort. The repetition of "I wish" emphasizes the speaker's yearning for physical closeness and emotional support.

One suggested line edit would be to replace "I just need to be 'someone's' again" with "I just need to feel loved again." This edit would strengthen the poem's theme of longing for emotional connection and highlight the speaker's vulnerability.

Overall, the poem effectively conveys the emotions of a difficult situation. However, the language could benefit from more poetic devices, such as metaphor or imagery, to enhance the emotional impact. Additionally, the ending feels somewhat abrupt and could benefit from further development.

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and sad all at the same time but the feelings are well understood. Long distance relationships are so difficult. Not always knowing where the other person is or what they are doing, not knowing if you have been replaced and are just sitting waiting for a pipe dream of broken promises that will never happen. I guess we reach a point where we need to decide to go on living even if it means living without the one person we truly love. As always, your poems are a pleasure to read. Well done!