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Dark Angel - No Angel.
Last night I saw no Angel
As only I can see.
No Angel sent from Heaven,
Sent from a darker sea.
No Angel sent from Heaven
Can thrill me as she does,
Can send my senses soaring
Can spirit up my Blood.
No Angel shows her beauty
With such abandoned joy,
No Angel spreads her soft white thighs
And lets her fingers toy.
No Angel stretched out on her bed
Her arched back to show,
No Angel stroked her soft pink lips
To make them moist and grow.
No Angel promised such delights
And yet my deepest fear
Is that this Angel who is not
Will one day disappear.
Will never let me worship at her feet
As I should do,
Pledge my soul and swear to her
Always to be true.
But then,
She is no Angel.
Lovelier then by far.
I would not want an Angel,
Though she promised me the stars.
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-12-21 11:22
dear Alex,
I have read your lovely poem a few times and will probably read it a few more to release the tedium of the day. it is exquisite and speaks to me of what I would become for my Steven. great beauty resides here within your words! it almost hurts.
*hugs, Cat
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Alex Tanner
Wed, 2022-12-21 13:55
Lost for Words
Hello Cat. I really don't know what to say, other than thank you and i am glad it pleased you. While penning this I had ideas for others that I shall complete as a group of Dark Angel poems, probably 6 or more. Just have to see how the words flow.
Alex
author commentAlex Tanner
Wed, 2023-01-11 13:35
Hello Kat
Hello Kat and welcome. I have only been on this site for about 6 weeks but have found some really nice helpful people. I look forward to reading your work. Best wishes Alex
author commentCandlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-11 14:50
hey Alex,
she is fabulous (Kat) I've read some of her work and is more than lovely...I could not think of words to respond to her. she is an artist, like you.
*hugs, the other Cat
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Alex Tanner
Wed, 2023-01-11 14:58
Intent
I shall Cat. I like work with power and intent. And the problems in Iran get no better. And I shall have to be careful not to confuse the two of you, the perils of age. Alex
author commentCandlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-11 14:53
my favorite lines are:
No Angel stretched out on her bed
Her arched back to show,
No Angel stroked her soft pink lips
To make them moist and grow.
your erotica is grace in motion it is soft and velvety. I could read buss loads of your work!
*hugs, Cat
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Seren
Mon, 2023-01-23 23:05
Dear Alex
This is so sensuous, I might need a shower I think. Phew.
I know what I want to say but I am trying to find the most decorous way of saying it. Like a cat after a saucer of milk.
I'm going to ummm come back. When I find the best way to put what I am trying to say. I recently posted a poem *explicit content* didnt get many reads lol I think sometimes people can't find the words.
I will read the No Angel 2 next, I realised this was the first one so I came back to the beginning. So very glad I did.
Brilliantly sensuous!!!
Kind regards Jayne-Chloe
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Seren
Mon, 2023-01-23 23:06
Dear Alex
This is so sensuous, I might need a shower I think. Phew.
I know what I want to say but I am trying to find the most decorous way of saying it. Like a cat after a saucer of milk.
I'm going to ummm come back. When I find the best way to put what I am trying to say. I recently posted a poem *explicit content* didnt get many reads lol I think sometimes people can't find the words.
I will read the No Angel 2 next, I realised this was the first one so I came back to the beginning. So very glad I did.
Brilliantly sensuous!!!
Kind regards Jayne-Chloe
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Alex Tanner
Tue, 2023-01-24 13:45
Hello Jayne
I am so pleased you enjoyed Dark Angel. I am working on several more in similar vein. Much more fun to write, but yes, They don't get many reads, or perhaps people just don't know what to say. I have some that I am not too sure about putting up but since 2 of the ladies have given me encouragement I shall. I hope they will not be too 'Kinky', only time will. I won't rush to put them up, lots of others I am working on but watch this space. Alex
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