The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Crosshairs" effectively uses descriptive language to create a vivid image of a sniper's experience. The use of short, concise lines contributes to the tension and suspense, mirroring the sniper's own focus and precision.

However, there are areas that could be improved. The phrase "slow intake of air, a silent breath" is somewhat redundant, as it repeats the idea of breathing from the first stanza without adding new information or perspective. Consider revising this line to provide additional insight into the sniper's mindset or physical experience.

The line "another game of spy vs. spy" is a bit jarring, as it introduces a new concept (spies) that hasn't been mentioned before in the poem. If the sniper is indeed intended to be a spy, consider incorporating this idea earlier in the poem to create a more cohesive narrative.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from more varied sentence structure. Many lines begin with a verb, which can become repetitive. Experimenting with different sentence structures could make the poem more engaging and dynamic.

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An interesting subject, this. Although dealing with death inflicted, there is no personal investment into the act other than pride in the craft. Very different from an "eddy" poem.

A couple suggestions:
In the 3rd verse, lines 2 and 4 both end with "test". Might I suggest that line 2 be re-written as "to demonstrate I am best".
In the last verse, perhaps line 3 would be better as "another game of cat and mouse".

I would say this is more like prose, and a story, I like the premise. A secret assassin, that goes off on short notice to make the world a safer place, by eliminating an enemy sniper. I think that you need to shorten some lines and change a few words here and there to make this smoother. Examples:

Picked up sealed orders
at agent central today
Black ops has my number,
they know I don't play.

The field where I shine
a plane ride makes near
Air France is landing
unloading my gear

Secret agent lady wins again!
~ Geez.
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