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Beauty
Beauty exists in many places
More than In our babies faces
Sometimes a thought we embrace
And a dress full of lace
A kiss from my wife
Or simply life
Loveliness
Finesse
Grace
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2023-02-21 09:27
dear Clentin,
very well done!
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Clentin
Tue, 2023-02-21 09:37
Thank you. After I read your
Thank you. After I read your like poem I felt that I should try. Hopefully I will get better.
author commentLavender
Tue, 2023-02-21 10:30
Beauty
Hello, Clentin,
I believe this to be a Nonet? So delicate and beautiful, and full of gratitude. If it is a Nonet, I think the first line has one too many syllables. Perhaps remove "so"?
Thank you!
L
Clentin
Tue, 2023-02-21 10:42
Thank you
Thank you
I thought I had 9 syllables?
I will recheck.
Is this officially called a Nonet.
Thanks, I will edit
author commentLavender
Tue, 2023-02-21 10:50
Beauty
Yes, it appears to be a lovely Nonet!
L
Geezer
Tue, 2023-02-21 13:40
Very nice Nonet...
Grace, a great description of grace, in a great Nonet. ~ Geezer.
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Clentin
Tue, 2023-02-21 13:47
Thank you for your comments.
Thank you for your comments. I was told that perhaps you could help me redo my page, color background, text etc. I am a premium member, new, but can’t seem to get how to use the site correctly
author commentGeezer
Tue, 2023-02-21 14:10
Okay...
See the black band at the top of the page?
at the right of the page you will see your name
right next to log out. Click on that.
Then on the drop down, you will see [edit my profile]
Click on that.
On the left of the new page, you will see a box with account in it.
Click there and you will see all the things you need to change
everything on your profile. If you have any difficulties thereafter,
I will point you to one of our techs. ~ Geezer.
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Clentin
Tue, 2023-02-21 14:23
Thanks. I followed your
Thanks. I followed your directions no color changes took place!
author commentGeezer
Tue, 2023-02-21 15:42
Hmmmm...
I will check up and see what the matter might possibly be. Did you hit save at the end?
~ Geezer.
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Rosewood Apothecary
Tue, 2023-02-21 18:49
Well done on the format
I fall into the same rhythms a lot. Stuff like this is a great exercise. In this case it’s got a touching subject and that makes for a sweet reading poem
Tim
Clentin
Tue, 2023-02-21 18:55
Thank you for your comments.
Thank you for your comments.
author commentLeslie
Tue, 2023-02-21 20:07
BEAUTY
THIS IS SIMPLE BUT SO BEAUTIFUL. IT INVOKES THE PUREST EMOTIONS!
The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!
Clentin
Wed, 2023-02-22 01:20
Thank you. My attempt at a
Thank you. My attempt at a different format
author commentRoseBlack
Wed, 2023-02-22 17:46
Clentin
Great job on the format and the meaning of the poem! If only everyone could step back and find beauty in even the smallest things, I think there would be much more happiness in the world.
~RoseBlack~
Clentin
Wed, 2023-02-22 19:09
Thank you.you are right more
Thank you.you are right more acceptance and understanding of others would change the world.
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