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Austin Schowe

Submitted by Kristen H. on Thu, 2024-02-01 20:07

Today, I saw boy that looked just like you.
At least how I remember you...

Light brown hair.
Short, straight, spiky...

He had your style
and your smile,
and he smiled at me.

I smiled back politely
but my heart sank
because he wasn't you.

I sat in the parking lot
a few extra seconds
to see him once more.

I know I'll never see him again
just like I'll never see you again.

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Last few words:

I miss you, my dear friend.

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Not Explicit Content

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