The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Aunt Nita's Tea Leaves Reading part #2 of 2714 Girard Ave, N. Ghost tale" presents a narrative that is rich in detail and imagery. However, there are a few areas where clarity and rhythm could be improved.

The first stanza sets the scene well, but the rhythm is inconsistent. The first two lines have a similar rhythm, but the third and fourth lines deviate from this pattern. A more consistent rhythm could enhance the musicality of the poem.

The second stanza introduces the character of Norma and her jealousy. However, the phrase "her newest student of the Arcane" is a bit unclear. It would be more effective to specify who the student is and what "the Arcane" refers to.

In the third stanza, the phrase "under her saddle a grain of grit" is a bit confusing. If this is a metaphor, it could be made more explicit to ensure readers understand its meaning.

The section marked with an asterisk seems to be a transition, but it's not clear what it's transitioning to. If this is intended to signal a change in tone or subject, it could be made more explicit.

The stanza beginning with "October thirty first, Halloween," is effective in setting a spooky atmosphere. However, the line "on her black hat crawled a spider" disrupts the rhythm established in the previous lines.

The stanza beginning with "Everyone in costumes and dark masks" introduces the concept of the narrator being a new witch. This could be introduced earlier in the poem to give it more context.

The stanza beginning with "Gifts I was given: Tarot Card deck," is effective in further developing the witch theme. However, the line "gift of the cosmos, Venus and Mars!" could be rephrased to fit the rhythm of the previous lines.

The final stanza introduces new characters and relationships, which could be confusing to readers. It would be more effective to introduce these characters earlier in the poem or to provide more context for their introduction.

Overall, the poem has a strong narrative and vivid imagery, but could benefit from improved clarity, consistent rhythm, and better character introduction.

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And insight into your gift! What a treat for you to have a mentor such as your aunt and even more of a treat that you share your gift and craft with others.

I thought this was very interesting and well written. My question is what relationship does James Patrick Page have with
these things. No disrespect intended in any way. It would be interesting to know if you have any information.

Disregard the inquiry, that was none of my business and I apologize for asking such a spurious question.

Jimmy Page is, was forever Led Zeppelin's guitarist.

Hi Cat, I loved this line: under her saddle a grain of grit
It says so much in so few words.
I was a little confused by Norma's jealousy but as I got to the end I realised it was down to the familial relationships that were present.
The flow and the rythm of the poem were captivating and it left me wanting to know more.
Good job, Ruby :) xx