The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Wood-smoke" effectively utilizes sensory imagery to create a vivid scene. The use of specific details, such as "a day of splashing, swimming and water games," "fisherman knit sweater," and "wood smoke," helps to immerse the reader in the experience.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm or meter to enhance its musicality. The lines vary significantly in length, which can disrupt the flow of the poem. Experimenting with syllable count or stress patterns could improve the poem's rhythm.

The metaphor in the last line, "wood smoke, was the color of your smiling eyes," is intriguing but could be clarified. The connection between wood smoke and the color of someone's eyes is not immediately clear to the reader. Providing more context or explanation could strengthen this metaphor.

The poem could also delve deeper into the emotions of the speaker. While the sensory details are strong, the poem does not reveal much about how the speaker feels about the situation or the other person. Incorporating more emotional language could add depth to the poem.

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A lovely, evocative capture.
I especially liked the transition to the comparison of wood smoke to the color of the eyes which adds a touch of personal connection and tenderness.
I thought, and this is only a suggestion that playing a little with line breaks and punctuation might enhance the flow of the piece, but that is only me.
I have emensly enjoyed reading your poem dear.
Thank you for sharing.