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Zack
Im shaving my head to a skinhead my
Eyes are hemorrhaging red with hatred
I wish everyone was dead, vomiting blood
and spilling out a pile of guts and crimson lines
of dripping throats
My fist crunches against the mirror shards fly like
spears, like my life I can't fix back together
I snap out of my deep thoughts and take my
head out of my desk, as the school
bell vibrates my heavy restless chest . I walk pass
shapes of crowded
voices and squint my eyes into deadly sharp daggers
They cut into a skinny boy minding his own
business, I charge knocking him onto his ass
but he is saved from his stupid rucksack.
My shadow
creeps over my victim like a thick fog over a city
he scrambles to get
to his feet and create distance, my dms are
slapping behind him.
I catch up with a psycho grin and pull out
my compass ready to drive it in, his eyes swung back
haunted wide screaming for his life why why.
Next thing I know my hands are around his throat
Squeezing until he stops fighting and kicking.
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Wed, 2024-09-18 17:40
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Leslie
Thu, 2024-09-19 09:13
Zack
Great vocab I like it, but a bit too violent. Someone innocent gets hurt,but keep writing I like your style!
All of God's children singing, holding hands in the rain!
Jokerface82
Thu, 2024-09-19 17:45
Yeah
Bully's are dark lol thank you, I appreciate the comment