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Tomorrow is another day-Time
Time is the essence of life
with each minute
of breathing
that is counted
Precious and priceless
like the grain of sand
drifting slowly
inside the ceiling hourglass
is measured with
each hour is passing
through the days of spending
So, are the days of our lives
live life to the fullest
with every given opportunity
of gratitude
Embrace with kindness
in the present moment
that's filled with a fond memory
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Lavender
Sat, 2023-02-04 18:40
Tomorrow Is Another Day - Time
Hello, Hon,
This is gentle and soft. With its form and style, it almost feels like the sand flowing through the hourglass.
Thank you,
L
Rula
Sun, 2023-02-05 00:52
Hello Hon
A good entry that delivers a precious message.
Well excuted.
Thank you for sharing.
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Geezer
Sun, 2023-02-05 12:49
Puzzled...
inside the ceiling hourglass?
~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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Abby
Wed, 2023-02-15 11:15
This flows really nicely.
This flows really nicely. Well done.
"To fly is to fall."