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Tangerine Dreams
Arise
Shake the cobwebs
From your eyes
Face the ochre skies
Cadmium and lace
A pumpkin face
Brassy hair
Skin whiter than fair
Coral shore
Titian lore
Peaceful slumber
Wrapped in peachy haze
Tangerine dreams
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2022-07-14 01:42
Yes!
That’s a good title and a better poem.
Tim
RoseBlack
Thu, 2022-07-14 01:43
Thank you
This was fun! Onward to the next color
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-07-14 06:18
dear RoseB.
I really like the way you have handled this challenge! extremely fanciful. thanks for answering the colors challenge!
*hugs, Cat
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RoseBlack
Thu, 2022-07-14 07:33
Hi Cat
Thank you for creating this challenge! It has been so much fun. I would like to see more informal challenges like this. The response has been widely received!
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-07-14 07:41
dear, RB,
you are entirely welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
do you have some Taurus in any of your houses or moon sign?
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RoseBlack
Thu, 2022-07-14 07:56
Maybe
I don't know how I would tell if there was Taurus
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-07-14 08:00
google it...
it might take a few tries, but knowing your DOB is the first step.
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