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Tangerine Dreams

Arise
Shake the cobwebs
From your eyes
Face the ochre skies

Cadmium and lace
A pumpkin face
Brassy hair
Skin whiter than fair

Coral shore
Titian lore
Peaceful slumber
Wrapped in peachy haze

Tangerine dreams

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

That’s a good title and a better poem.

Tim

This was fun! Onward to the next color

~RoseBlack~

author comment

I really like the way you have handled this challenge! extremely fanciful. thanks for answering the colors challenge!

*hugs, Cat

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Thank you for creating this challenge! It has been so much fun. I would like to see more informal challenges like this. The response has been widely received!

~RoseBlack~

author comment

you are entirely welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

*hugs, Cat

p.s.
do you have some Taurus in any of your houses or moon sign?

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I don't know how I would tell if there was Taurus

~RoseBlack~

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it might take a few tries, but knowing your DOB is the first step.

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