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Dream On...
Hairy Brute, eyes of yellow
Shining in the night
Standing silent, in the meadow
Giving me a fright
It stalks my camp, makes low growls
Sits in the piney wood
It scares the wolves, stops their howls
I know it means no good
What it intends, I don't really know
I hope it goes away
The night is passing, oh so slow
I can't wait for break of day
I'm in my tent and fitful sleep
Dreaming now, of my girlfriend's pair
I'm so warm, feel the wool of sheep
Wait a minute, I think that's hair!
I hold my breath, think a minute
I don't believe it's true
She's here with me, my bag, she's in it!
I call her name, that you?
A big, soft sigh, warm breath in my ear
A caress down you know where
I think I've had too much beer
But I don't really care
I'm glad you're here, is what I think
But your hair is wild and your hands are tough
I've noticed that you have a stink
Your tongue in my ear is kinda rough
My brain begins to make a scene
Things ain't right, you see
I'm thinking of, what that might mean
I'm so scared that I might pee!
Strong arms enfold me, hold me tight
Stronger than a man
Oh well, relax, enjoy the night
I'll run later, if I can...
Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2020-02-22 10:37
Made a couple...
of adjustments, what do you think?
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Geezer
Sat, 2020-02-22 16:00
Nope...
I think I've made all the adjustments I'm going to. I'm satisfied with the meter now, the way it is. Thanks anyway.
~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Geezer
Sat, 2020-02-22 16:19
I've made...
all the adjustments, I'm going to make on this one. I'm satisfied with the meter now. Thanks anyway.
~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Miserably Happy
Sun, 2020-02-23 06:38
Dreams
Had to and wanted to read again and again. Fear of the unknown? How much do you want? Acceptance, ahhh!
Good open ended journey.
Miserably Happy
Geezer
Sun, 2020-02-23 14:29
I had a dream...
Not like, Mr. King, but one after seeing a story about a man that was saved by a female Bigfoot and lived in a cave with her through the winter. I got to wondering...
~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
scribbler
Sun, 2020-02-23 16:00
Hey Geeze
Try replacing "there" with stealthy in line 3. The rest well depict the fear of things that go bump in the night