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You take me to TARDiS

Submitted by Jakub Zoltowski on Sun, 2022-12-25 20:45

Nothing can stand in my eyes, for a while I stood at home.

Oh Why/ I cannot find the words. For Your eyes. Or dream.

I cannot speak.

I am where life ends in a Tardis of your eyes.

Some thing good.

I am a song for a something good :)

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