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Walk
Slowly to the river.
I walk, every night. Just.
To see the world of my blank page.
The letters of my imagination.
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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neopoet
Sat, 2024-07-20 02:03
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Walk" captures a sense of contemplation and introspection through the act of walking to the river. The simplicity of the language used adds to the reflective tone of the poem. However, the brevity of the piece leaves the reader wanting more depth and development of the themes introduced. Consider expanding on the emotions or thoughts experienced during these nightly walks to provide a richer experience for the reader. Additionally, exploring different poetic devices such as metaphor or imagery could enhance the overall impact of the poem.
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Lavender
Sun, 2024-07-21 00:16
Walk
Hello, Jakub,
Your writing is pretty abstract - but I take away how it speaks to me. There's a little expectation here - otherwise there'd be no walk every night.
Thank you!
L